http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/ Monthly Online Liteary Magazine - Memorable Creative Nonfiction - Memoir, Essays and More Tue, 21 May 2013 03:11:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-976 Sofia Rasher Tue, 17 Apr 2012 11:26:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-976 Finally, a man’s honest observation about what a man in this culture really wonders about and how he easily is misled into believing the media versions of what we will experience when we do something “out of the ordinary.” Kudos to the author for an honest picture. Women are not the only ones adrift in this “brave  new world,”

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-970 Bigvin007 Thu, 12 Apr 2012 07:34:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-970 nice shot story. I’ve been there also, only wished my girl friends would self serve themslves. Once I dropped a load into a haggis, but couldn’t locate it after the oats swelled up.

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-964 Jonathan Briggs Fri, 06 Apr 2012 13:41:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-964 Wise choice. Although I would have gone with Feltstein.

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-961 Shamer223 Thu, 05 Apr 2012 17:25:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-961 It’s actually my last name – Shamersonfeltstein. Shamer seems easier.

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-960 Jonathan Briggs Thu, 05 Apr 2012 14:24:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-960 Why is your name Shamer? Do you go around shaming writers? Just curious.

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-953 Jonathan Briggs Wed, 04 Apr 2012 04:47:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-953 “It’s four in the morning…” Was it the end of December? If so, you should rewrite the third paragraph. Everyone loves Leonard Cohen. Oh, and good stuff.

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-952 Sherman P. Wed, 04 Apr 2012 04:37:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-952 Shame on you, Shamer, for asking such a good question. It can be found here: 
http://www.amazon.com/Life-Form-Substance-Thoughts-Sperm/dp/1466270756/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1333514122&sr=8-1

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-947 The1true1 Tue, 03 Apr 2012 20:38:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-947 Would make a great off-broadway show, and an even better indie flick, for sure. Ever think about adapting it?

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-945 Mary-Terese Cozzola Tue, 03 Apr 2012 17:34:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-945 So many great observations in here — the woman and her tattoo, patting the container, “stupid and proud…” 

]]> http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/2012/04/the-first-shot-davis-williams/#comment-944 Shamer223 Tue, 03 Apr 2012 16:56:00 +0000 http://www.hippocampusmagazine.com/?p=2853#comment-944 Cool story. It says it’s an excerpt. Where can I get the whole thing?

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